A short poem

SkyeBlu
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I'm falling
Falling
Falling down again

Everytime I try it seems
the devil always wins

And though you know I'm trying
as I really truely do

I'm falling
Falling
Falling down again
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jester747
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Awesome bro. :D

I really really like that.

It's simple, straightforward, and awesome.

Also:
as I really truely do
'Truely,' should be 'truly.'
"Hadouken"
-Ryu from Street Fighter

Voted favourite N00B of 2008.
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Chozon1
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GRAMMAH NOTZI. >_>

Though I too, really like that dude. Very good.
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Love it!

I can relate....
8)
Never judge a book by it's cover
and don't underestimate them either.
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