A short poem

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A short poem

Postby SkyeBlu » Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:02 pm

I'm falling
Falling
Falling down again

Everytime I try it seems
the devil always wins

And though you know I'm trying
as I really truely do

I'm falling
Falling
Falling down again

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Re: A short poem

Postby jester747 » Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:25 pm

Awesome bro. :D

I really really like that.

It's simple, straightforward, and awesome.

Also:
as I really truely do
'Truely,' should be 'truly.'
"Hadouken"
-Ryu from Street Fighter

Voted favourite N00B of 2008.

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Re: A short poem

Postby Chozon1 » Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:04 am

GRAMMAH NOTZI. >_>

Though I too, really like that dude. Very good.
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Re: A short poem

Postby Eagle Eyes » Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:07 pm

Love it!

I can relate....
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and don't underestimate them either.


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