I miss your smiles.

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I miss your smiles.

Postby TripExistence » Fri May 20, 2011 2:43 am

Since my old topic got pruned ( :( ), and I haven't been writing too much recently, I'll probably just end up posting new topics for everything new I write, unless I get hit by a mass of inspiration.

This one I've been working on for several months; it's one of the first songs that the music has come first...but there are some musically vacant sections because I haven't had my guitar to work the rest out. Some of the lyrics are eh to me, but I think it fits what I was going for.

I miss your smiles.

I miss your smiles
I miss your face
I miss those lines we used to say

I miss your voice
and the way we ran
to catch a color-coded van

I miss the shops
that called out my name
and the dusty clouds that still remain

Chorus:
And I can’t let you go
But I will let you go

I miss our streets
where we used to walk
In the weight of your laugh, I felt so small

I miss the smells
And the taste of the rain
Won’t you come back to get wet again?

Chorus:
And I can’t let you go
But I will let you go

Bridge:
The shade shrinks away, stand in the sun
Give me a page, I’ll write out a gun
To shoot the monster of change and regret, his son
There’s fiction to hang your head on

I miss the smells
And the taste of the rain
Won’t you come back to get wet again?

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Re: I miss your smiles.

Postby Chozon1 » Fri May 20, 2011 7:15 am

Dude. Good, but powerful.
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Re: I miss your smiles.

Postby Kayla » Fri Aug 30, 2013 5:03 pm

Id like to here the music you have for this. :D
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Re: I miss your smiles.

Postby ccgr » Fri Aug 30, 2013 5:40 pm

sorry about the auto prune :( Nice lyrics though!

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Re: I miss your smiles.

Postby Emwok » Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:15 pm

Id like to here the music you have for this. :D
Me too! Great lyrics.
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