And now it's songs...

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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Chozon1 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 4:00 am

This...is not my normal happy songs.

I 'spose we had to be srs face sometime.

I'm empty now,
and I feel my heart is broken,
my muted screams unspoken,
there's a hole inside my chest.

What a beautiful pain.

I'll miss you now,
until this world is opened,
and the sundering seas unbroken
they flow gently to the West.

What a beautiful pain.

There's a gaping wound inside my heart.
And love is pouring down my face.
So this lament I wrote for you.
Until we meet again. (what a beautiful pain)

I'm hurting now,
but there's a love beyond life's ending,
through the pain that you have woken,
as you fell into your final rest.

What a beautiful pain.

There's a feeling here,
unlike any I remember,
and I'll choose to hold this ember,
though it burns my hands to ash.

What a beautiful pain.

There's a reason that I choose to hurt,
to quietly forget would be so much worse.
As we walk under the sun, remembering those gone,
this is why I say, what a beautiful pain.

How great is your mercy O Lord.
How great is your mercy O Lord.
I feel you now, and I know that You are with me.
I don't know how, but I know that you weep with me.

So hold them dear, our loved ones that have passed.
Please keep them near, safe within your grasp.
And O Lord please help us bear our pain.
Until we meet again, we suffer such a beautiful pain.
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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby ccgr » Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:38 am

very good! I like how it shifts at the end.

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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby TripExistence » Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:07 am

Loved it.

Also, you've improved greatly amigo.

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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Chozon1 » Thu Sep 01, 2011 2:03 am

Thanks.
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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Eagle Eyes » Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:49 am

It's beautiful!

It made me cry...
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Postby JOJ650s » Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:34 am

Very good! :thumbup: :thumbup:
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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Chozon1 » Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:48 pm

Thanks. ^_^
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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Chozon1 » Sat Sep 17, 2011 2:49 am

Count it down, Little Jimmy!

Though I live in space, I see the earth.
I see the problems, and the pain, and I know it's getting worse.
But I remember time, from the first.
I shone above the new king, the baby at His birth.

And so we sing in praise,
though we know the painful days.
And so we feel His gaze,
as he hears our lamenting praise.

I shine all day, blinding with my light.
I find it unsurprising you only see us glow at night.
I shone above this planet as the King finished the fight,
Still sometimes it seems the shadow has more substance than the light.

The glory at creation was rotted by the fall.
Broken now, holding on some how.
Man made his bed and now only wants to sleep.
While the legions of angels close their eyes and weep.

It's said within his book, these days shall pass.
And the end is love and happiness, that evil cannot grasp.
Until the those days arise, we will hold fast.
And face the many evil's 'till the King comes home at last.

And so we sing, in praise,
though we know the painful days.
And so we feel, His gaze,
as he hears our lamenting praise.
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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby ccgr » Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:57 am

nice! I like it.

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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Chozon1 » Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:21 pm

Thanks. ^_^
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Re: And now it's songs...

Postby Chozon1 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:00 am

Title says anything I would've.

I cracked open my heart, and this is what poured out.

When does dreaming start and the truth stop?
I try to speak the truth, you claim I'm wrong.
Burn it down, this web of lies,
before the spider sinks his bite.

You rely on logic, I on love.
The one I'm not worthy to sing of.
You've broken my heart, and crazed my mind.
I began to think that you are right.

The poisons racing through my head.
I dunno when I'll stop to think.
The life is leeching out of me,
this failing ship starting to sink.

I left the truth to follow your lies,
no more substance than thin air
I left the one who gave us life,
and now I fear we both will die.

I live in this world, yet am not of,
It afflicts me with it's hate.
I tell you of truth, tell you of love.
And in return you drain my blood.

But for His love my soul would be d***ed.
I'll try once more, and once more again,
though I risk the serpents tongue,
I'll still tell you of the One.
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