Page 1 of 1

A short poem

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:02 pm
by SkyeBlu
I'm falling
Falling
Falling down again

Everytime I try it seems
the devil always wins

And though you know I'm trying
as I really truely do

I'm falling
Falling
Falling down again

Re: A short poem

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:25 pm
by jester747
Awesome bro. :D

I really really like that.

It's simple, straightforward, and awesome.

Also:
as I really truely do
'Truely,' should be 'truly.'

Re: A short poem

Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:04 am
by Chozon1
GRAMMAH NOTZI. >_>

Though I too, really like that dude. Very good.

Re: A short poem

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 3:07 pm
by Eagle Eyes
Love it!

I can relate....
8)