I am a writer, and a gamer, and a Christian, so I decided it might be fun to combine those three things into some stories. I have finished one of them and wanted to get some opinions, maybe even a thorough review if someone could find the time.
It's called "Humans VS Robots". Gamers compete in tournaments of real life video games, and the main character tries to share his beliefs with his team mates.
Here's the first story:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PaH ... sp=sharing
A friend and I are currently working on the second story, which will be the second "episode" of Humans VS Robots.
If you have any questions, shoot me a PM.
Thank you for taking the time to read this.
"Humans VS Robots"
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Humans VS Robots #2 has just been finished and is available to read below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cjn ... sp=sharing
Thanks for taking the time to read this.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cjn ... sp=sharing
Thanks for taking the time to read this.
When life gives you lemons...
make a combustible lemon.
~Plaidley
make a combustible lemon.
~Plaidley
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Cool story I like the blend of faith and gaming
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Thank you so much! There will be more to come.ccgr wrote:Cool story I like the blend of faith and gaming
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looking forward to it!
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Alright, if anyone is interesting in helping me uncover mistakes in my story please feel free to. I have a few people helping edit but the more the merrier, I guess.
When life gives you lemons...
make a combustible lemon.
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